Hi Laurie,
Thanks for the kind words. This was a joint project in my second year at uni and my first full stop motion film. I could not agree with you more on the scale of the violin. It would have been better just a tad larger. There were other things that i feel did not work on this project but oveall it came across fairly well.
Justin Hopes
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The Ballad of Suzie Lou Jenkins
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This is the finished version. There is a section that i am not happy with. The accordion playing Siamese twin at the start of the motelmusic school section. This would have been really nice as a proper puppet. Please feel free to leave feedback.
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I think you did a fantastic job. The girl and her room look really professional, and the way she turns the newspaper looks great. I was a bit taken out of the movie by the scale of the violin next to the bed size when we first see the violin, it really makes me realize this is a miniature set. I feel like the size of the violin should be larger on the bed and that would not make it look so relatively tiny. Just a suggestion. Although children's violins are small, I think is should be a little bit larger in regards to her scale, what do you think?
Wednesday, 02 June 2010 21:09
